A little tired...
I definitely get the feeling of going to sleep, like nothing matters...
Like : Composition / Voice FX / Vocal Performance
Dont like: Guitar FX (metal tube?) / Mixing (voice is muddy)
You've achieved the mood you intended, although the execution leaves still more to be desired. With some tweaking this acutally could be a really great song. Keep it up!
yeah, i recorded this about 6 years ago actually. my recording techniques are a lot more polished when i want them to be now. the guitar f/x you dont like is a really metal flanger, i don't like it much either, but i have been too busy with new music to go back and rerecord all my old stuff...forward thinking you know..
Like: Swelling Hiss / Static / bass drum / snare (a little lofi, but I like that)
Dont like: Shaker... (a little generic for me) / Bass ( a little muddy)
Overall I think you've got a successful song that creates a fun but creepy mood. Not a masterpiece... But not bad at all.
thanks for the review,i will see if i can fix the shaker and bass
Love F-Zero. Love this song.
Not really original, but it would have been easy to mess it up, which you didn't.
well actually i used a midi file for the precise riff but it seems that the midi wasn't exactly precise either i'm looking to take this song off and put the improved version up here...
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